Cresent BIO (WIP)

[Cresent]

Name: conservator-recognizer-entity, and salvage-E.N.T., c.r.e.s.-E.N.T., or Cresent as his nickname.



Gender: Male



Age: 15 cycles (teen)



Species: He was built to resemble a Unicorn



Pelt Color: metallic grey (depends on mood)



Mane/Tail Color & Style: Sharp, geometric. Colors are blood red and gunmetal grey (depends on mood)



Eye Color: Blueish (depends on mood)



Cutie Mark: None as he is a machine



Residence: None, Wanderer



Occupation: Guardian (of what is unknown)



Talents, Skills: Very high durability, regenerative capabilities, and water breathing.



Likes: water, swimming, and thunderstorms



Dislikes: heights, and flying he is absolutely mortified at the concept of flying and is terrified of heights.



Character Personality: Intelligent, perceptive, sometimes ruthless and merciless, calculating, observant (yet to be known at times to be oblivious emotionally) and also very inquisitive.



Bio: He was Built by an advanced alien civilization, Cresent is a cybernetic machine. Designed as an infiltration unit like a terminator. Standing 17.5 feet and weighing 3 tons he can sometimes be a nuisance to others around him. He was constructed as a guardian with an ability to learn, grow, and develop a personality. He has no magic (meaning he cannot learn spells or use them.) but has high energy containment within his horn to levitate things and shoot high energy blasts from. The blast destroys the molecular bonds of the target, killing it instantly. (most of the time, depending on the size.) He is bulletproof and can withstand high temperatures and powerful energy blasts. He can also regenerate his outer layer of living tissue.

[Cresent]

is this an accepted bio?

[Stygg Whitefeather]

No. First you posted this in the wrong location. Second, this is a giant advanced alien robot terminator with a death laser (I swear I was just talking about this earlier), which conflicts entirely with our canon, rules, etc... If you want to rp on this board, you're going to have to redo this character from the ground up in accordance with our story/setting/rules/etc...

Unless you're a troll, then you have 24 hours till I IP ban you. If you don't respond or alter this by tomorrow, you're banned.

Edit: Also you posted in RP before being accepted. Strike 2.

[Cresent]

OK then I'll start over don't worry

[Cresent]

Name: Cresent

Gender: Male

Age: unknown

Species: unknown

Pelt Color: metallic grey

Mane/Tail Color & Style: sharp and geometric. Colors are blood red and gunmetal grey

Eye Color: blueish

Cutie Mark: none

Residence: none, wanderer

Occupation: guardian (of what is unknown)

Talents, Skills: regeneration, water breathing

Likes: water, swimming, and thunderstorms

Dislikes: flying, and heights

Character Personality: intelligent, perceptive, cold, calculated, ruthless, merciless, and anti-social

Bio (optional) : his origins are unknown but he is very mysterious and also is very tall, taller than most other ponies.

[Cresent]

There! all fixed! Please don't ban me!

[Stygg Whitefeather]

This bio tells me nothing, I have no idea what he is, or who he is, or anything about him. It's just a stripped down version of the death-bot (and could just as well be the death bot in disguise). He also can regenerate and can breathe under water, which, unless he's a kelpie, he can't do one of those things at all. And guardian of what, as an admin I'd like to know?

This character could not fit here. Also your sentence structure and writing mechanics are sub-par, which leads me to question your age. We do have a 15+ age barrier on the board, and these bios put into doubt you're above said age. If you're not going to show effort, you won't fit in here and there's 0 effort in that "redone" bio. Also you should have modified the original, instead of just copy-pasting over into another reply then deleting text.

If you can write up an acceptable bio by the time I check this tomorrow, I'll consider it, otherwise you won't be approved and we'll have to ban you.