Eclipse Shine (FINISHED)

[Eclipse Shine]

Name: Eclipse Shine

Gender: Female

Age: Young Adult-23

Species: Unicorn

Pelt Color: Grey 

Mane/Tail Color & Style: Red with silver streaks, kept in a braid.

Eye Color: Lime green

Cutie Mark: An eclipse with red lines spiraling out


Residence: Canterlot

Occupation: Corporal in the Equestrian Army (Magic Force)

Talents/Skills: While her special talent is conjuration, she is also quite skilled at abjuration magic. She knows a few basic evocation spells, but she is much more skilled at fighting with a sword with her telekinesis.

Likes: Magic, training, cookies and milk, the Yellow Flashes

Dislikes: Heights, doughnuts, lazy ponies, demotions

Character Personality: Eclipse Shine is very loyal, brave, and disciplined, coming from her time in the military. Though she may initially seem cold and aloof, she is very compassionate. However, Eclipse is a perfectionist, a result of taking discipline too seriously. She is extremely stubborn and keeps her feelings bottled up and doesn't confide in others much. Eclipse often pushes herself too far to achieve her goals and neglects her needs.

Bio (optional) : Eclipse Shine decided that she wanted to become a powerful mage that protected Equestria from evil monsters when she was very little. She gained a sudden fascination in conjuration magic. Eclipse got her cutie mark when she successfully teleported from one end of her Manehattan home to the other. 

As her life progressed, Eclipse learned of the Yellow Flashes, an elite group that specialized in teleportation. She made it her goal and life-long dream to get accepted into it. When she turned 18, she enlisted in the Equestrian Army. During the next 6 years, Eclipse made her way up the ranks to her current position.

[Stygg Whitefeather]

Is this complete yet? Is so, remove the WIP so it can be considered for review.

[Eclipse Shine]

I finally finished! I was a bit stuck with her occupation because I wasn't sure what her rank should be. So I sent a PM to Red about it, but he hasn't responded in a while. I decided that it had been too long and I gave her a rank on my own, but I played it safe since I have no idea how you advance in the ranks in the military or where she should be when she started. If there is a more appropriate rank because of her skills and experience, please say so.

[Stygg Whitefeather]

Corporal seems about right. Alright, you're good to go. Be sure to either create a new account for this character or alter your name to reflect this.

[Eclipse Shine]

Thanks!