Blaze Sunflare

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Name:  Blaze Sunflare

Gender:
Male


Age:  Adult


Species:  Unicorn 




Pelt Color:
 Red


Mane/Tail Color & Style:
Red, Flat Top. 


Eye Color:
 Red


Cutie Mark:
 An anvil and a hammer. 


Residence:
 Canterlot

Occupation:
 Blacksmith


Talents, Skills:
Weapon Forging, weapon use. 


Likes:
Crafting new items
Making weapons
Selling weapons to people he trusts
Creating new chemical formulas 



Dislikes:
Having his stuff stolen
Being ripped off
Senseless destruction 


Character Personality:

Blaze would be a good candidate for the element of loyalty, but for one small problem. The not so small problem is actually one that makes up the core of who he is, his temper.  Suffice to say some believe him to be a volatile time bomb.  Steal any of his possessions, and you'll learn exactly how volatile he happens to be. Attack ANYONE he even remotely considers his friend, and well you're in for the beat down of the century.   

Blaze could also be considered heavily chaotic, and unpredictable. This has often given people opportunities to compare him to the entity known as "Discord" but he doesn't believe any such comparisons hold true.  When he sets his mind to something, Blaze will not stop and will keep pushing until he either burns out, the task is completed or someone knocks him out.  The current actions of Princess Celestia have made Blaze start to reconsider making armaments for the royals because if they're both evil, he doesn't want to help them. 

Cutie Mark:  His cutie mark is a hammer striking an anvil, a gear, and a star. 

Current  Inventory: 

 

The yet to be named sword. It's Blaze's signature weapon. It can absorb attacks against it of an energy nature, and release red cutting waves of power.  It will also only let him or those he absolutely trusts wield it. Otherwise it will disappear until he needs it again. When not in use it appears to be a black hoof bracer.  

Pendant: A pendant that allows him to channel his rage into a new form of power, allowing him to create energy constructs. It's a useful item. Blaze is unaware of where the item came from or where he got it or who gave it to him, or anything like that.  It can also allow him to shoot energy beams right out of his horn. They're normally colored crimson. Barriers can also be made because of the pendant supplying the power he needs to do so. 

[Stygg Whitefeather]

Character's weapon and pendant are over-powered and beyond even the scale of most of our best quest artifacts - certainly not even close within the realm of weapons able to be created by current ponies. He would never even be able to learn how to create weapons like that through experiance and training. You never even explain how/when/etc... he was able to create or acquire these items. On CD, you earn things through questing, posting, participating, no pony gets something like this given to them. We're not that type of RP, try a Final Fantasy/Dragon Ball/Etc... board if that's what you're shooting for. We're more Game of Thrones.

Also not keen on his personality, like being compared to the Element of Loyalty and to Discord. He's a God Mode Stu and a Jerk Stu, there's no possible way I could accept this character. You need to reevaluate this entire character.

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*groan*

Please delete this app.