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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2015 20:55:05 GMT -5
Name Hey there! You all can call my Candy, my friends call me Creek but normally Candy.Candy Creek Gender Mare Age Young adult Species Oh I wish I was a Unicorn, all that magic! So amazing.. But I'm just a simple Earth pony .Pelt Color White Mane/Tail Color & Style Well, I guess you can call it poofy ? I'm not sure, I make it extra creative when I style it.Eye Color A nice blue might I sayCutie Mark Its two candy canes behind a petal picked pink daisy .Residence Hoofington , me and my pony friend move around a lot, but that's where our farm is!Occupation I farm mint leaves with my Pony friend Pepper Fresh!Talents, Skills I have a skill for flower picking , but I'm really good at making candy with me and my pony friend's mint leaves!Likes Candy Farming Exploring Flowers Dislikes Critters "Get away from our crops!"Large places {open plains} Bullies Spiders "Yuk!"Character Personality Candy Creek is very kind, generous, and humorous. She's very curious at times and loves to explore new city's. She has the tendency to put her nose in other people's business and sometimes she can have a rude attitude, but at the most she loves to make a pony smile from kindness. Role play sample { I want to show what I got! } On a cool fall evening Candy was trotting through the harvest, most of it was curling and shriveling because of the freezing temperatures but Candy was still tending to the Mints. Dry dirt clung to her tail, she usually tied it up in a bun when she picked the leaves but she was in a hurry, she wanted to get on her way to traveling with Pepper Fresh. They started there moves when they didn't have to tend to their harvest; though some times Candy got Pepper to go places in the summer which did cost them a few mint plants. Picking the last few mint leaves she placed them in the basket trotting back to their house she hurried to put everything in their places. Even though there was still three days until they made their way to their next destionation Candy wanted it to come quicker, so slowly she gained speed each day so she could go to bed earlier but this time she did her things a little too earlier. Pepper Fresh would have to deal with her bored groans and he sighs of defiance, it was too cold to pick flowers, they'd already be gone by now. Letting out a mournful cry Candy sighed. " Pepper!" she trotted her way up the stairs to her room to clean the dirt out of her tail. " Why can't we leave tomorrow?" she yowled throughout the house to reach to Pepper Fresh who was babying her choice mint plant she took in for the winter and cared for it, a little weird if you asked Candy but she's dealt for it for a long time so she'd get used to it. [/p]
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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Feb 11, 2015 21:07:05 GMT -5
Please expand upon your character's dislikes, surely she dislikes more than just spiders?
Also there is no Mustangia in the CD universe, please choose one within our setting. You may also choose to have them located in a village/town located near any of those locations but, please indicate which location they are closest too. Do those things and we'll consider your character's application.
Also, be sure to read our history/lore and current events; and be sure to ask any of the admins if you have any questions.
Welcome to Celestial Divide.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2015 21:12:33 GMT -5
Please expand upon your character's dislikes, surely she dislikes more than just spiders? Also there is no Mustangia in the CD universe, please choose one within our setting. You may also choose to have them located in a village/town located near any of those locations but, please indicate which location they are closest too. Do those things and we'll consider your character's application. Also, be sure to read our history/lore and current events; and be sure to ask any of the admins if you have any questions. Welcome to Celestial Divide. I've changed it miss c: I hope its towards your liking, and there's so much reading on this site! Just means more night reading for mee.
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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Feb 11, 2015 21:22:25 GMT -5
Alright, if you plan to reside at that location, we want where exactly you'll be operating from. From the description, I'd assume Hoofington region would be closest outside of any wilderness area. Update that and you're good to go.
Also, keep an eye on your formatting and spacing so it's neat and easy to read for everyone.
And yes, there's a lot to read. Red Charge, the board's creator, has expanded upon the universe quietly extensively. With that note, be aware that anything post-season 2 has not occurred unless otherwise stated.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2015 21:31:24 GMT -5
Alright, if you plan to reside at that location, we want where exactly you'll be operating from. From the description, I'd assume Hoofington region would be closest outside of any wilderness area. Update that and you're good to go. Also, keep an eye on your formatting and spacing so it's neat and easy to read for everyone. And yes, there's a lot to read. Red Charge, the board's creator, has expanded upon the universe quietly extensively. With that note, be aware that anything post-season 2 has not occurred unless otherwise stated. Sorry for all the hassle c: I've changed it to Hoofington and I like the format finding it easy to read, there's just extra colors. I'll look into it later though!
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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Feb 11, 2015 21:41:16 GMT -5
Different colors are fine, most of use it for the purpose of dialog, just don't go crazy with it. Meant more like lack of spacing in the RP sample or the smaller font size. Not all of us have the best eyes.
Anyway, you're good to go.
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