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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Nov 18, 2014 20:37:29 GMT -5
You're bordering a bit close to mary-sue territory with this character. First thing which needs addressing is her abilities. She's just far too good at too many things. Despite her age, since she's a new character she will have to work towards proficiency. So with the 4, choose which one she is really good at, which she's competent, one which she's learning and one thing she has a ways to go with. Address those first then the administration will consider the rest of the character as a whole.
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