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Post by Deleted on Aug 9, 2014 16:36:05 GMT -5
Name: Winter Flask
Gender: Female
Age: Teen
Species: Unicorn
Pelt Color: White
Mane/Tail Color & Style: Orange and elaborately-styled.
Eye Color: Blue
Cutie Mark: Flask
Residence: Use to live in ponyville but fled to canterlot.
Occupation: Scientist
Talents, Skills: Science
Likes: Chemistry
Dislikes: Failures
Character Personality: Kind
Bio (optional) : Unknown
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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Aug 10, 2014 15:28:56 GMT -5
Nothing really wrong, except that I would like if you could flush out the personality, likes & dislikes, and more on her occupation as a scientist. I feel there could be a lot more said and if there were more information, the admins can better help progress your character along. Really, right now, it doesn't paint us a very developed picture.
Also, for the Bio, is it a case where you don't want the players to know their backstory? If so, you will have to send the bio section to the admins for approval. We don't allow making up history on the fly in case it contradicts another player or history.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2014 20:50:31 GMT -5
Nothing really wrong, except that I would like if you could flush out the personality, likes & dislikes, and more on her occupation as a scientist. I feel there could be a lot more said and if there were more information, the admins can better help progress your character along. Really, right now, it doesn't paint us a very developed picture. Also, for the Bio, is it a case where you don't want the players to know their backstory? If so, you will have to send the bio section to the admins for approval. We don't allow making up history on the fly in case it contradicts another player or history. Sorry, It's kind of hard for me to think of the background of the characters and their personalities and all, but I'll try to fix it the best I can. |
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