Zephyros
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"We can see him for what he truly is with the power of Insight!"
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Post by Zephyros on Feb 2, 2014 2:50:29 GMT -5
Name: Scarlet CharmGender: Male Age: Young Adult Species: Earth Pony Pelt Color: White Mane/Tail Color & Style: Red/Light Red, Brushed Back Eye Color: Gold Cutie Mark: Red Flower Residence: Hoofington Occupation: N/A Talents, Skills: Diplomatic persuasion, distracting charm, hard to lie to, good with a sword. Likes: Peaceful resolution, free meals, fighting. Dislikes: Bad food, snooty people, others having an unfair advantage against him. Character Personality: Scarlet's an odd one; he's cheery in almost everything he does. Now, while that's normal in talking to ponies and trying to calm down tense situations, he also enjoys fighting. He's happy when he gets to battle with others and he even gets excited at the prospect of killing, such that he has to hold back at times. Bio: Brought up as the son of a farmer, Scarlet had to play the voice of reason between his often arguing parents. When he learned how to manipulate the fight, he also learned he had a knack for getting what he wanted simply by saying the right things. He eventually became good enough at persuading his parents that all he had to do was smile and they would stop fighting and smile as well. While he discovered his special talent for having a silver tongue, he was no stranger to physical labor. There wasn't a chore he didn't try and help with. Though, he wasn't exactly the strongest earth pony ever; his mother being a pegasus might have had something to do with that. He became lean and fit through working every day, adopting his mother's physique. Scarlet was happy with his life on his parent's farm, but he yearned for greater things. He set out on a journey of self discovery with only his saddle bags of supplies, a sword, and a a few bits from his parents.
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Post by Red Charge on Feb 2, 2014 23:37:27 GMT -5
Everything seems decent here - with the exception of "immune to lies" even the slipperiest diplomats can be lied to. There is no such thing as being immune to lies. Also where is the residence? Please state a settlement or otherwise a region. Keep in mind since the invasion it's become unsafe to live anywhere but inside a pony settlement (unless he's in the Griffon Kingdom)
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Zephyros
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"We can see him for what he truly is with the power of Insight!"
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Post by Zephyros on Feb 3, 2014 0:21:20 GMT -5
That's fair. This, upon looking at it again, is an unfinished sheet! I forgot some of his back story; thanks for reminding me. However, I also wanted to ask about your guys' version of the map; it looks totally different from the canon map. I don't know where any of the settlements are, or if there's a list I can choose from.
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Post by Red Charge on Feb 8, 2014 3:50:37 GMT -5
Approved
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