Mantross

[UnCommentator]

Name: Mantross

Gender: Male

Age: Teen

Species: Pegasus

Pelt Color: Silver (Extremly Light Blue)

Mane/Tail Color & Style: Purple, Spiked Forward

Eye Color: Purple

Cutie Mark: Headset and Controller (Can't change talent (commentary) to ponyverse)

Residence: Near Ghastly Gorge in the Everfree Forest

Occupation: Odd Jobs/Unemployed

Talents, Skills: Above-average flyer, Good vocabulary, Smart, Incredibly fast learner, Great aim, Good swordspony, Fast Reactions.

Likes: Hunting (no killing just tackling), Racing, Exercise, Hanging with friends, Solitude, Learning, Relaxing with music, Being scared, Scaring other ponies, Playing jokes, Challenges, Candy, Friendly Cats.

Dislikes: Long-term social interactions, Bad singing, Grapefruit, Unreasonable Ponies, and Having to do things without being given a reason.

Character Personality:Mantross is a friendly pony. He is usually willing to help if you ask him but he dislikes it if you don't give him a reason, if you're a stranger and you don't give him a reason he probably won't help. He can have fun hanging with friends but enjoys being on his own as well. He is very intelligent but has trouble with emotions, others or with his own. He has a keen eye and never too quick to rush in somewhere unless he believes it's safe. If he has decided something no one can change his mind unless they prove every fact he believes is wrong or they provide him with better facts. If someone says something he will usually think of something he likes better, and will suggest before following through. Mantross can be extremely generous but not all the time.He is responsible and hardworking, although getting him to start working is difficult. If he needs to be he will be serious but can have trouble know when he needs to be. Someponies think he's odd for it but he likes to hunt animals, he never kills but he loves the chase.

P.S. This character is basically me so I won't use him much until I've played a little bit with a character I don't mind as much if it dies.
P.P.S If I need to rerevise anything wrong with this please teel me the small issues with it.

[Stygg Whitefeather]

There are a few issues of concern with your bio, and I'll address the most glaring.

Firstly, if you don't actually plan on using them much then why not just create a character you plan to actually use? On CD, the players do run the risk of character death, as that is part of the overall experience here, thus if you feel intimidated by that aspect for this character it would be best that you create one who you aren't extremely timid to lose.

Next, by "headset and controller", I assume you mean modern videogame paraphernalia. On CD we have deviated a bit from the canon of the show and while there is some modernish technology, we try to keep it in the realm of late Victorian-Edwardian with other earlier periods mixed in (excusing the obvious fantasy elements and technology).

Next, living in the Everfree Forest, unless you're Zecora or undead, is a death sentence.

Last, for your character personality, we prefer you write a narrative out instead of giving us random data from personality quizzes. If you are having trouble with this aspect, I recommend consulting other accepted pony bios for examples of what we're looking for. Also you may contact one of the Admins, such as myself, for further assistance.