Esmerie

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Names: Esmerie

Gender: Female

Age: Young Adult/Mare

Species: Earth Pony

Pelt color: Cream

Mane/Tail Color & Style: Short, flipped brown mane; long and curled tail

Eye color: Green

Cutie mark: Unfortunately, still a blank flank. She has yet to figure out what her true passion is.

Residence: Fillydelphia

Occupation: Caretaker at the local orphanage

Talents: Making up fun and wild stories to keep the young foals entertained and happy.

Likes: Foals of all ages, reading, making up her own stories for either herself, her friends, or the orphans, going out on a moonlight trot for relaxation and meditation, mangoes and peaches.

Dislikes: Anypony, especially Diamond Dogs, who mistreat young and defenseless foals, boring, bland, uncreative, and unoriginal stories, bananas and cucumbers.

Character personality: Esmerie is very protective and motherly by nature. Whenever she finds a colt or filly in distress, she gallops at full speed to the rescue. She is kind to everypony she meets, although she'd prefer to spend her time with foals instead of older ponies. One of her flaws is that she's quick to get impatient whenever a foal misbehaves or doesn't do as she says, but tough love is still love as she puts it. She has yet to find a young stallion who'd enjoy listening to her many tall tales and share a life and family with, but for now she's fully dedicated to her orphans and cares for them as though they were her own.

Bio: Named for her bright emerald eyes, Esmerie was born to a middle class family as the eldest of eight foals. When her mother fell ill and died, she had fill in the role of mother for her family. All her brothers and sisters were disheartened at the loss of their mother, so she developed her talent of telling wild stories to help them forget the tragedy and keep their fragile spirits high. When all her siblings grew up and left home to lead their own lives, instead of feeling relieved for no longer having to care for them like she was hoping, she felt empty and unneeded, so when she heard that the local orphanage was piling with foals (thanks to the Diamond Dogs) and was in need of more caretakers, she immediately took the job and hasn't regretted it since. Though she's not one to hold a grudge so easily, she finds it hard to forgive the Diamond Dogs for the harm they've caused everypony, especially to her orphans.

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[Red Charge]

Nice bio, I love how you're trying to integrate with the plot! The Diamond Dog occupation however, has only been around for a couple of days, really. Canonwise the invasion started about 2-3 days before the current point in the board's time. Though they most certainly have been extremely brutal about it. That's the only tweak I see you need there.

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Thanks so much!! And okay, I'll get that error fixed whenever I can.

[Red Charge]

I see you edited your bio, great, approved!