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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2014 18:02:28 GMT -5
Name: Flawless Clockwork
Gender: Male
Age: Teen
Species: Unicorn
Pelt Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue
Cutie Mark: Gears
Residence: Canterlot
Occupation: Clock maker
Talents/Skills: Good at making clockwork items such as clocks and automatons
Likes: Muffins, Apple cider, Music, the sound of clockwork ticking
Dislikes: Getting called Gearhead
Personality: Calm, a little arrogant, sure of himself, kind
Other: He usually has by his side an automaton of his own design.
Automaton information: the automaton is usually a Pegasus model, which he built to have speed and maneuverability. It has blades hidden in its fore hooves and uses twin swords as a primary weapon. The blades attach to chains that are also built into the fore hooves, that way they can be thrown at its opponent and be pulled back as well as used in various combos. The automaton is powered by a gemstone in its chest that must be recharged with magic.
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Post by Stygg Whitefeather on Jan 13, 2014 19:03:15 GMT -5
Interesting concept, but too overpowered. He can be great at making clockwork machines but the consciousness transfer and automation itself is far too powerful an ability for a player character, especially a new character.
Please rework the abilities for re-review. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact myself or Red Charge.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2014 14:18:31 GMT -5
Understood. thanks for letting me know
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