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Baxter
Dec 9, 2011 20:15:24 GMT -5
Post by Klepto Moonlit on Dec 9, 2011 20:15:24 GMT -5
((I likely might not be using this OC until the first plot line ends, but I wanted to go ahead and post it now so I could have plenty of time to make any necessary changes. Mods/Red, feel free to let me know about any changes you want me to make.)) Winter Wolf (Diamond Dog Subspecies) Name: Baxter Gender: Male Age: Adult Species: Wolf Pelt Color: White Eye Color: Light Blue Pack: Rex Nocte Occupation: Archer Talents, Skills: Intermediate Archer Likes: the idea of a diamond dog nation uniting against ponies and griffins, those who agree with him, fletching Dislikes: ponies, dragons, griffins, those he expects to do what he says but don’t Character Personality: Baxter has a persecution complex coupled with an extreme sense of nationalism. He takes great pride in his heritage while believing diamond dogs have been cheated and betrayed by pony and griffin-kind, resulting in their exclusion from the other two’s relative prosperity and occupation of arable surface territory. As a result, he is very distrustful and hostile towards almost all ponies. In terms of the common diamond dog of Equestria, he expects them to do what he says without question. This stems from his view that they are too spineless or stupid to act on their own, what he believes resulted in their enslavement to the dragons. At times, Baxter can be prone to rapid changes of tone and emotion: disgusted one minute to mocking, vehement, or solemn the next. Overall, he has an unsettled appearance about him, constantly looking around in a paranoid manner when not focused on something. While somewhat manic in appearance and dialogue, Baxter is also very set-minded. He adheres to a strict battle strategy of intimidating the opposition and creating controlled chaos on the battlefield. Bio: Baxter comes from a small, closely-knit pack of winter wolves from within the Northern Wastes. The archer has spent most of his life in the wastes, hunting and performing mercenary work as a group with his pack. Baxter has always had a more ambitious, nationalistic attitude towards the diamond dogs as a people compared to his more apathetic pack-mates, spending much time envisioning and fantasizing about the diamond dogs being able to unite and bring what he believes to be well-deserved justice upon pony and griffin-kind. Baxter has been itching for conflict with the ponies and griffins, but believes the common diamond dogs of Equestria are too cowardly to take back what is theirs. He believes they would join an organized attack only with the initiation and leadership of the winter wolves, and finds frustration with the apathetic reluctance to do so of those around him. He desperately waits for them to change their minds, and for a war with the ponies and griffins to begin. (best shot at what he should look like)
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Baxter
Dec 9, 2011 21:06:56 GMT -5
Post by Red Charge on Dec 9, 2011 21:06:56 GMT -5
Corrections to make Klepto - Winter Wolves have no castes, they're all warriors. They also don't have diamond collars (only Diamond Dogs do, as a symbol of their past slavery to dragons) They also wear armor, either of a light or heavy variety (as the monsters and conditions in the northern barrens are the toughest and harshest.) Also, most Winter Wolves consider the Diamond Dogs "lap dogs", inferior, due to their initial surrendering to the dragons (Winter Wolves never allowed themselves to become enslaved upon creation)
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Baxter
Dec 10, 2011 23:37:23 GMT -5
Post by Klepto Moonlit on Dec 10, 2011 23:37:23 GMT -5
I've edited the bio and the image. Once again, feel free to let me know if anything else needs to be changed.
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Baxter
Dec 11, 2011 3:32:18 GMT -5
Post by Red Charge on Dec 11, 2011 3:32:18 GMT -5
Looks fine, seems like he's going to love the second plotline.
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